I love your sprite a lot, it looks amazing. Firstly has an unique color style, also the entire design looks so vivid.
Well, I love making pixel art too, but there are few "rules" that you're broking. I've just looked at your art from deviant last 24 hours featured browse, and I wanted to help. Just look at this:
It's one of the principal pixel artists troubles that you can find over all designers; ¡Color wasting! You have a lot of colors in there, wasted colors I mean. ¿What a wasted color is?
Wasted colors are colors that you have on your drawing that are highly similar to another on the same piece. Having one or more similar color on your art, you may delete one of them and then remap your pixels to get a new color palette.
Look at this image:
Left one is your one, and right one has a reduced color palette (32c).
The overall looking is the same, but technically you'll be doing it by the right way. So if you "kill" those wasted colors you'll get a better and more professional art without reducing your art quality.
Hope you understand my CC, if you have any question just ask.
Keep going. ^^
-A +6 years experienced video game artist.
Por cierto,no sabia que eras de habla hispana o_o ....
I knew something was wrong in the sprite.
but i didn't know what,i tried to use the least amount of colours possible but i have some difficults with it .
(for all drawings (including pixel art) i use Paint tool sai , i previously used MS Paint for Windows XP for pixel art but now i moved to Sai because it was kinda easy)
the problem i have with sai is that i want to save the palettes but when i restart the pc ,the palettes are gone. (and i'm that kind of person that use any kind of effects to make the sprite looking good , so sometimes i became lazy and i forgot to save the palettes.)
but well thank you very much for the review and give me some tips for the palettes,i'll try to make my best next time.
So you just need to practice saving your own color palettes into a png/gif file, by that way you'll be not wasting colors.
Por otra parte, no tengo problema por usar el español. No tienes porque dejar los mensajes en ambos idiomas, es algo raro. ≥‿≤